In my sleep and in my consciousness
Loves you my heart and all my soul.
Only your image appears everywhere:
Virtual, yet bright, right in my heart.
Enter into my life, to trigger our journey;
You are the one I am waiting to live with.
Offer thine sweet love to me
Until my lonely heart quenches its thirst.
This was my first poem ever, written when I was 12 yrs old, for my dream gal... The dream is yet to be realized... ::)
Loves you my heart and all my soul.
Only your image appears everywhere:
Virtual, yet bright, right in my heart.
Enter into my life, to trigger our journey;
You are the one I am waiting to live with.
Offer thine sweet love to me
Until my lonely heart quenches its thirst.
This was my first poem ever, written when I was 12 yrs old, for my dream gal... The dream is yet to be realized... ::)
7 comments:
you wrote this Poem wen u were 12 yrs old....but ...wat to say...i feel the poem sounds quite mature..for tht age! a very sweet poem! :)
Thankyou Amukta..
I'm really pleased and honored...
I wish my dreamgal listens to this(plea) ::)
good one man... you had a very good command over the language even when you were 12... well, hope your dream girl accepts your plea... ;-)
Hey Raviiiii...I know that u didnot write it at 12 coz i am one of the first to whom you showed this poem.... But it looks incomplete to me... The one you showed to us gives the better lyrics and better Love.. Where have u lost all that Love :-)
Thankyou Mithun... :)
@Subbu: The one I showed you during our junior college was a revised version of the original that I had written during my schooling... Since I grew up and was more mature by then, the revised one should have definitely been better.. Nevertheless, the original is always the original.. Hence, I posted that... :-)
HI ravi..
I know u right from our schooling.. i think at that time only u were very good in writing all these stuff .. i think u have written poems in Telugu also.. with all gramtical things..
Hi Thirumal,
I am happy you remember our school days so well... Nalanda School is one of the most beautiful happenings in my life!!!
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